Capote once said that this story was one of the best examples of style that he'd ever written, and I certainly agree, but I think it also has characters with the most depth. He never says too much about anyone besides the two main characters, but those two seem like they could truly be real people. As I've studied Capote, I've found that this is where his talents truly lie. Even when he's writing about real people he portrays them as whole and complete people. The older figure in the story, for example, shows maturity as well as a childish side that makes her age unimportant. Within that is also the effortless friendship that seems so natural to both parties that makes the story so much more fun to read.
Lastly, one of my favorite quotes ever comes out of this story. It describes the two cracking and shelling pecans to make fruitcake, the usage of imagery is absolutely gorgeous.
“Our backs hurt from gathering them: how hard they were to find (the main crop having been shaken off the trees and sold by the orchard’s owners, who are not us) among the concealing leaves, the frosted, deceiving grass. Caarackle! A cheery crunch, scraps of miniature thunder sound as the shells collapse and the golden mound of sweet oily ivory meat mounts in the milk-glass bowl...The kitchen is growing dark. Dusk turns the window into a mirror: our reflections mingle with the rising moon as we work by the fireside in the firelight.”
This is certainly something I'd love to emulate someday. If anyone is interested in writing quality short stories I beg you to read this it is truly a masterpiece in terms of character development and style.
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